
Yeah… and it’s perfectly paced, tons of action (brief interludes of cutes at times), and going to keep people on their toes from start to finish, so prepare yourself for an influx of feels! Just remember some of our favorite excerpts for it…



Yeah… and it’s perfectly paced, tons of action (brief interludes of cutes at times), and going to keep people on their toes from start to finish, so prepare yourself for an influx of feels! Just remember some of our favorite excerpts for it…


TorchMLP: I remember one time you got a comment complaining about how long the chapter was, Neon
Phoenix: Did they want it longer or shorter?
Phoenix: Hah!
BorrowedTime24601B: they complain if they think it’s too long, they complain if they think it’s too short
BorrowedTime24601B: no one’s happy
nightmares06: And I all get is complaints about being too short
Neon: People who complain about chapter lengths need to chill XD
TorchMLP: your chapters are perfect nightmares
wolfie180g: chapters should only be as long as they need to be. my longest was 19k, and shortest chap was 4 k
wolfie180g: of course i get far too wordy
nightmares06: XD I’ve taken to shorter chapters because suspense is fun
Phoenix: And of course whatever emotions the chapter itself made me feel.
Neon: I’ve ended up with more variation in chapter length
wolfie180g: night, your chapters have everything you need in them – succinct and perfect

Oh, dear. Poor Jacob, and his tumbly nature! We’ll just have to wait and find out. I can’t imagine the scolding he’d get if he caused an earthquake in the room, lol.
As for chapter length, I must point out that with the development of my writing style has some changes to how chapters are set up. I gravitate towards suspense and anxiety, therefore we’ve gone from chapters that were usually ~3k to 4k words to chapters that can vary from ~1.5k to 5k words. With three updates a week, this shouldn’t be a problem. And there will be times that the word count goes under!
Because word count should never drive how a story is set up. The writing itself should do that.