Thank you so much for this 🙂
I know just what you mean. I’ve been working hard on getting better. After all, one day I dream of writing my own book and hopefully getting published. I go back and look at the older chapters of my stories, and I do get the urge to attack them with editing. It makes me grin to compare a snippet of my writing from back then to what I can do now. Not that I’m perfect now, but there’s a palpable difference in the flow and tone and overall format of the story.
And if you compare Reversal or Ounce to any of it, those poor fics ^^; they could use an overhaul.